"Bhid se alag dikhne pardes chala tha ghalib,
chand paise kamane aur kuch naam karne ke liye sir-per chala tha ghalib,
kaal ke chakra main aur paredes ki hawa main kuch is kadar khoya,
ki bhid se alag dikhna to dur, bhid main jaane layak bhi na raha paya ghalib"
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This shayri is composed by me and it is tributed to Galib. This is specially for people who come abrod with big dreams and ignore values of little things ... but when life starting acting on them ...they start appreciating the beauty of their home, their people, their country
... ghalib expresses here that they can get better visibility even staying in their own country ...as long as they understand human values and contribute towards it...
-Ashutosh
2 comments:
...use of better language is always welcome ...
new version:
Bhid se alag dikhne pardes chala tha ghalib,
chand paise kamane aur kuch naam karne ke liye sir-per chala tha ghalib,
kaal ke jaal main aur paredes ke vesh main kuch aisa roop le betha, ki bhid se alag dikhna to dur, bhid main jaane layak bhi na rah paya ghalib"
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